Within You...

I saw that miracle

no where

but in your eyes.. 

felt the freshness

of breeze in your breath 

Warmth of the sun in your arms... 

I was alone 

completely 

Alone 

on the side of sea beach

 but

...the first wave of tide

touch my feet 

and 

gave me your presence

 I closed my eyes , 

hold my breath 

And begin to count my heart beat...

I found you

and hold you in my arms...

I saw that miracle no where 

but in your eyes.. 

felt the freshness 

of breeze in your breath 

Warmth of the sun in your arms...

I was alone completely 

Alone 

on the side of sea beach but 

... the first wave of tide

 touch my feet 

and 

gave me your presence

 I closed my eyes , 

hold my breath 

And began to count my heart beat.... 

I found you

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This is amazing imagery and the love that is poured into this piece is quite stunning and romantic. I love the waves tickling your feet. The ocean is a magical thing indeed. It can be calm or it can brew on hell of a storm. This was done wonderfully.

[PokemonFan#1]

I loved this poem! Please keep it up!

[bobby]

Absence make love grow fonder. I wanting poem so full of desire.

[Dream Weaver]

Enchanting imagery, there's nothing more
breathtaking then a beating heart describing
"Love" in it's essence...

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. Your words took me to the ocean and the emotion of touching someone far away. A very good ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

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A most beuatiful write here. Enjoyed the read....xo