'True' Vs. 'False' Friends

'True' Vs. 'False' Friends

A Poem by Amrita Sharma Pokharel

I started my voyage


A gaming for a true friend


Begin the search from hill-plain, sea-land, ocean-desert, hell-heaven...

 

I end the journey by the river side,


Beside huge jungle side by side


Colorful clothes, tall elegant man, mass of hooligans...


My eyes halted and focused


I moved my way towards them,


Some magnetic forces pull me near the pale guy...


He began to fantasized fairy-tale with me,


that he had heard


From his mother’s lap to till his maturity


I wondered in his wonderland,


His magic charm multiplied in me,


A man without feet, leg and hand


It was his-story,


But I found the whole world in him...


Happiness lift up,


Tears started to exchange


Gossips crossed the limit...

 

Dark night fell around,


Only he

 

And Me…


Perfect silence,


Cool breeze win through,


I lost,


Fell into his mysterious eyes...


And that was that...


But,


All of sudden,


Shouts!


Cracked my hallucination


I found the man in front me


Who turned to be a “biggest liar”


A false friend


Who only wanted to play with,


My heart,


No matter how much it hurts...!

 

In this hunt of true friend,


Finally,


I found myself-


Hunted and hence, lost my heart... 





© 2011 Amrita Sharma Pokharel


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Real friends are few in a life. Would be a better world. If we had a safe place where we could be who we are and be with people with the same desire. I like how you told the story in the poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

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Real friends are few in a life. Would be a better world. If we had a safe place where we could be who we are and be with people with the same desire. I like how you told the story in the poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Present reality, nice work

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Genuine friends are truly hard to come by.
If you are lucky to have just one good one
Then you are indeed blessed....

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I agree, its hard to find a good-real-trustworthy friend...almost all of them are Hooligans

Very beautifully penned :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Amrita Sharma Pokharel
Amrita Sharma Pokharel

Farwest , Nepal



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I am neither Emily Dickinson nor am unnoticed ripples of emotions.. I am in search of light within in me ..... gone through many tunnels....to behold the lights at end but ...found the emptiness..... more..