The Faint Memory

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  • It was the age of lost generation,
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  • The age of  lusty miracle...
    
    
  • An extravagant lifestyle,
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  • Emotionally wounded,
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  • Spiritually bankrupt
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  • Lives have little or no meaning,
    
    
  • If one is unable to stand against the crowd...
    
    Everyone  drifted on seeking,
    
    
  • Love and life...
    
    
  • Sleepless-Insomniac...
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  • the frightening dreams ; Night mares
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  • Broken up..
    
    
  • By your hard words,
    
    
  • You left
    
    
  • [Silence for the moment..]
    
    
  • I wanted to see you !!
    
    
  • ...we talked for a while 
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  • Abruptly we weren’t talking...
    
    
  • any longer..
    
    
  • the First “nice”person i had ever known
    
    
  • Excitingly desirable...
    
    
  • Breathless intensity of youry presence,
    
    
  • took away my heart..
    
    
  • Husky voice
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  • Charming face,
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  • Mysterious eyes
    
    
  • Polite manner...
    

    Man without history,
    
    

    Dreaming for glorious future ..
    
    

    Bare in present...His individuality
    
    

    Touched by his sense of security,care and  

    “TRUST” ..
    
    

    I was nowhere to be found, entirely "LOST’’
    
    

    But

    -Betrayed
    
    

    -Breathless..."ME’’..
    
    

    Thrown apart-We 
    
    

    Way of ambition ,getting deeper in love
    
    

    Every moment...
    
    

    Unexpectedly,

    You're gone!
    
    

    I stretched out my hand...desperately
    
    

    To snatch only a wisp of air,
    
    

    Where i can find you and your aroma
    
    

    But, it was moving,you already gone
    
    

    Blurred the vision..
    
    Tears

    
    
    Broken Promises...
    
    
    You will remorse !

    If you had searched harder ,
    
    

    You would have found me
    
    

    But 

    Now 

    I am strong enough 

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    o gather

    the fragments

    of my heart

    so

    I’m leaving you
    
    

    I know  that you are lost! 
    
    

    But the freshness of your Love and care..

    Will remain ..forever...

    As this- The faint Memory...

    
    

Reviews

[R J Askew]

I enjoyed the sense of youthful love-hope. How silly it makes us, though at the time is is all soooooo deadly serious as we know no better. And a new generation is doing exactly the same ... right now ... someone out there is feeling love bleed from them, just as you describe.

[Joe Shetina]

Touching and very well-written.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing words and artwork. Sometime we must overcome sadness and learn to begin with better wisdom. I like the story and the positive ending to the poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Brenden Taylor]

Eh...it's a decent enough poem, but I have some mixed feelings about it.

On a good note, I saw some nice images with the language - "to snatch only a wisp of air" and "everyone drifted on seeking / love and life" to name a couple.

I can't exactly pinpoint any particular things about it that I didn't like in the lines. It's just that this is an idea that has been expressed so many times and so many different media; it almost seems unoriginal just because it's the same words, clips, and phrases that I see in every other poem/book/movie/song/etc.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Digging the treasure of valuable experience, nicely written poem..........

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Strong from start to finish, the last line awesome!

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokhar..]

Very realistic write...awesome...feeling...true emotions

Ams...keep on writing