The Concept

You see Death as a concept

The only way you understand

I see Death as a child

Troubled and scared

Despite his aggression and eager, swift hand

Death is forgiving, gracious and sound

Death rescues many by silencing pain

Because Death knows from life, we all must be saved

Saved from our petty, unsubsiding depression

And taken to rest upon guilt-riden reflection

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting concept on death.
"Death is forgiving, gracious and sound
Death rescues many by silencing pain"
Your words are true. In death. Was was done on Earth is forgotten and left behind. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Amy J]

Thank you so much :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Alex]

I love this piece and how you've interpreted death in several ways. I love the characteristics you assign to death, I totally agree with you. Well done with the emotion behind the writing- it certainly moved me!

[Amy J]

Thank you so much, really appreciate your feedback :)

[Einstein Noodle]

:) .. pretty much can say no more :) .. good stuff Amy!
E.

[Amy J]

Thank you so much Mr Noodle, I really appreciate that, especially coming from such a great poem yourself!