Inundation

Information,
data flowing.
Flowing
through my
being.
Invisible hands
working my
mind,
Kneading
like clay.
Shaping,
forming what
I think.
Formatting
how
I think.
Information
invasion,
out
to capture
terrain,
territory.
Coursing
the folds
of my
mind.
Capturing
the ripples
of my being.
Homogenization
of thought
globally.
Power of
information.
The power to
control,
brainwash.
Brainwash
all who stare
too long.
Too long
into the
abyss!

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is the most creative & powerfully stated thing I've ever seen, regarding the way technology owns our lives & we've been infiltrated, inundated! This is wild & awesome & so-so-true! I almost got the sensation of being swirled down a toilet, unable to gasp for air as a load of s**t pulls me down the drain! I love this in a twisted way (since the truth you expose is actually tragic) . . . (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[E.J. Waling]

Thank you Margie, I appreciate your thoughts.
JG

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, definitely an abyss...and we are all trapped in it and falling deeper...the shortness of the lines and the alliteration give this that perfect mechanical rhythm, like a computer...
j.

[E.J. Waling]

Thank you kindly for reading my work.