Immense!
In all aspects
immense.
Immense
without
limits.
Never ending
creation.
Creation of
possibilities.
All possible
iterations
realized.
Creation
complex beyond
understanding.
Beyond the
scope of most.
Once inserted
existence
never ending.
Moving within.
Moving
endlessly within.
Segment to
segment.
Lesson to
lesson.
So much
to learn.
Infinite
existence.
Time,
space
all wrapped
into one!
Existing in
continuum.
This is an exciting way to impart one's vision about the gift of life. Sometimes I don't go in for much repetition, as it can be done mindlessly for emphasis like exclamation points. But in your poem, the repeated words & phrases feel well-crafted to build intensity & momentum as your message feels like it's taking wings for flight (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Hi BG,
You honor me with your comments. Thank you.
This is an exciting way to impart one's vision about the gift of life. Sometimes I don't go in for much repetition, as it can be done mindlessly for emphasis like exclamation points. But in your poem, the repeated words & phrases feel well-crafted to build intensity & momentum as your message feels like it's taking wings for flight (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Hi BG,
You honor me with your comments. Thank you.
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