Floating

Floating

I float.

I float

through

existence.

Watching things

floating by.

Swirling currents

move,

move

me along.

Dream like

I observe

what seems

to be.

Accepting

what I see?

Wondering.

Wondering

if deeper

realities

are in play?

Wondering

how

I came

to be?

Wondering

why

I came

to be?

Answers

elusive,

never to be.

I float forward,

forward to

conclusion

Reviews

[R.E. Ray]

What you've illustrated here, in words and format, is depth and layers of growth, perhaps different perspectives and transformation through life experience. Sometimes the mind needs to "float" to rest... and see the world from another level. Well done.

[E.J. Waling]

Thank you for reading my work and for your kind reply.

[Kelly Scheppers]

What I like about your format here is that it brings your every word into focus. In doing so, your reader's attention is better kept because of the impact it brings. Good work, John....and interesting artwork!

[E.J. Waling]

Hi Kelly,
Very intuitive. That’s exactly the point. Each word has meaning which gets lost in sentences and paragraphs I think.

JP