What I read here is the lone head game we silently play, desires vs. doubts. We have so many aspirations and thoughts, and when we're about to lunge forward, society and history break in and whisper "you'll fail"... "you're not good enough," etc. Once we realize it's our own rules that truly matter we're truly free. A good reflection and poem that many can relate to.
Very nice flow of words. I hate rules and signs. I remember when I was station in California. Signs near the ocean. Private, do not enter. Less rules and free the sea John. Wonderful words shared my friend.
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What I read here is the lone head game we silently play, desires vs. doubts. We have so many aspirations and thoughts, and when we're about to lunge forward, society and history break in and whisper "you'll fail"... "you're not good enough," etc. Once we realize it's our own rules that truly matter we're truly free. A good reflection and poem that many can relate to.
Or indeed, no rules apply, we gather whats wrong, we appraise it and finally we ultimately ignore most, to see if time solves our issues, which of course nothing is, well done, good read.
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