Eyes2

Eyes
gazed,
glazed.
Distant
stare.
Mind
numbed.
Seeing
times
end.
Knowing,
it would
come.
Tough
nonetheless.
It has
arrived.
No turning
back.
No way
out.
Fate’s
hand cast.
Time
and place
declared.
This day
will not
be denied.
Journey
ends.
Great
and not
so great
alike,
have
made the
trip.
Last
sunset.
Long
journey
into
darkness
has begun.
Inevitable!

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Interesting use of words and also structure... All down one long line... Does keeps ones attention as of course one wonders how will this end?? And then the end came... which was inevitable. As it will come...
Enjoyed the ride... First I have read of yours.

[E.J. Waling]

Hi L,
thank you kindly for reading my work.
JP

[Lisasview]

You are most welcome.

Lisa, now in Spain

[John the Baptist]

Turn out the lights, the party's over. Has the sound of Judgment Day, this one. The tone, however, is not one of panic, but of acknowledgement of a sort of completion. Inevitable!

[E.J. Waling]

Completion indeed. Can’t hold on to something that simply blows away. Thank you for reading JB