Forms3

Forms3

A Poem by E.J. Waling

Forms.
Platonic
forms.
A world
apart.
Realm of
possibilities.
Where
all things
are possible.
Perfect.
Always
there.
From
the beginning.
A realm
far older
than
current
sentience.
From there
to here.
Forms
morphing
materializing
through
sentience.
Minds
pulling,
manipulating,
forming.
Creating.
Humanity’s
creations.
Inventions.
Delved
from a
different
place.
Deep
vein of
possibilities.
Forms.
Unlimited.
Many
beyond
current
ability.
Waiting
for greater
sentience
to mine.

© 2024 E.J. Waling


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Your poem effectively explores the concept of Platonic forms, emphasizing the relationship between ideals and material existence. The repetition of "forms" reinforces your theme, and phrases like "deep vein of possibilities" create strong imagery. A few lines could benefit from clearer phrasing, but overall, it invites thoughtful reflection. Great job

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E.J. Waling

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Your poem effectively explores the concept of Platonic forms, emphasizing the relationship between ideals and material existence. The repetition of "forms" reinforces your theme, and phrases like "deep vein of possibilities" create strong imagery. A few lines could benefit from clearer phrasing, but overall, it invites thoughtful reflection. Great job

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

E.J. Waling

1 Year Ago

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E.J. Waling
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E.J. Waling is considered by many in the literary community to be the Salvador Dalí of poetry. His rough-hewn unfettered style mimics the artist’s unconventional view of perceived real.. more..