Eagle

You the eagle

I the sparrow 

You circled my sky

I was drawn to your shadow

The breadth of your wings

Your powerful beak

I found rest in you

more than ever-- I became

Your happy meal

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

The introductory lines were powerful Sabrina. You write very poetically and with passion. I really enjoyed your skillful take on the Eagle, its role or roles and how it fits in the scheme of nature. Kudos.

[SabrinaM]

An eagle seems magical and powerful and so in control of its life. It inspired me. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing this poetry.

[Sami Khalil]

"I firmly await your return
Swift on the rays of a shimmering sunrise
Sweeping me off"

[SabrinaM]

Thank you very much.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

"Keeper of my dreams...
I see you among eagles, skimming the skies"

[SabrinaM]

Thank you very much.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Hailey Pippitt]

Nice I like all the descriptive words. I like the use of of the eagle metaphor to describe to the keeper of your dreams watching over you. It gives a clear picture as to what is going on in the poem.

[SabrinaM]

Thank you very much

[Hailey Pippitt]

You’re welcome