The alphabet speaks

For the alphabet aerobics contest ... man did i work out :p

Allow me to speak

Before I collapse in words

Creepy noises in my mind

Dying from the silence

 

Everything said has no meaning

Fear it will all be useless

Gemini syllables are forming

Here within my mind, floating

 

Internal speed provoked

Jester’s the one responsible

Killing my sentences

Leaving nothing behind but clutters

 

Minor drawback won’t suffice

Nor will major flood of words

Overdose of vocabulary

Persistent writing to set them all free

 

Quality before quantity shall be the rule

Revoked breathing the cause

Simultaneous pronunciation got the best of me

Time will tell if they fall

 

Under moonlight uttered whispers

Validity expired

Where once was emptiness

Xerox white lips

 

You remember

Zazzle filled kisses made the story

 

Reviews

[Bubo]

This is the best aerobics whatever I have read.........all about words and writing
with frustration!
Loved it..........you're very clever!!I couldn't do this!!

Many lines I thought great................

Quality before quantity shall be the rule
Revoked breathing the cause
Simultaneous pronunciation got the best of me
Time will tell if they fall

FAB!

[John D Stankosky]

Everything that I'd ever want to say in this poem has been said in the other reviews. This poem is just brilliant with thought provoking statements. Thank you so much for entering my contest, I enjoyed your submission a lot. Good luck!

[Randall]

Very well done. Even using the alaphabet you did a splended job, it flowed easily and without hesitation, very creative. I liked how it was about writing and ideas.

[Rie Sheridan Rose]

Interesting piece. It is cool to hear it from the Alphabet's point of view. :) I like your clever word play, and I might have to use zazzle in a piece someday, just because it is such a cool word. :)

[Z.Silas]

This poem is awesome I love stuff like this, I think I might try and write one.

"Minor drawback won�t suffice
Nor will major flood of words
Overdose of vocabulary
Persistent writing to set them all free"

This is my favorite stanza in the poem I feel like it's the anchor of the piece, I hope to read more stuff like this from you.

[Wulfstan Crumble]

Alphabetic athletics indeed. You used a lot of words which were different to most other ones like this that i've read. Zazzle being a very good example. At no point did this look forced. Its all good until we put ourselves into corners and get stuck. But this never seemed to happen here. So thats cool.

Quality before quantity shall be the rule
Revoked breathing the cause
Simultaneous pronunciation got the best of me
Time will tell if they fall

Very interesting segment here. The top line could be about the cafe, and about writing. Some people put stuff up everyday, 2 or 3 pieces while others only put up 1 or 2 pieces a week. But, it could also be about reviews. Some give few reviews but really good ones. Others are the opposite.

Nice piece.

[Kchung]

Zazzle is definitely a fun word. You also get bonus points for the orange font and the vocabulary used here! Fun stuff