Beach memoirs

Haiku about summer

Blistering hot heat

Sun cream spraying out droplets

Vaporized sunbeams

 

Uncountable men

Staring at shiny bodies

Tent shaped pants walking across

 

Tanned silhouettes lie

Soaked in heating attention

Summer calls upon

 

Reviews

[Rei]

oh yeah that are three perfect haikus that describe what summer at the beach is all about. The second one in my mind was the best because it was a little funny yet sexy at the same time. Great job! Thank you for writing this.

[Brianna Brie]

Tanned silhouettes lie
Soaked in heating attention
Summer calls upon

Great Haiku string! Love summer and the beach. Your poem makes me salivate for the heat of summer.

[Jasmina Amethyst Pendra..]

Sumer is so awesome for me because I am passionate about going to the beach and swimming. I love the beach more than anything and I have so many memories there. This poem hits a very special place in my heart and I am so glad I was able to read it. Thank you. ~Liv

[M Lamont]

Summer rocks and so does this poem! I think I may have to do a summer haiku, too!

[Taja B.]

This is a very nice poem with a haiku structure. It's well written and it describes the summertime and being on the beach very well.

Nice job.:)

[Bubo]

Lovely haiku describing summer and all
those undressed bodies.......great warm colour to
use too!!