Redemption

A Poem by Anata

Come forth out darkness

Rejoice in the light that brings

Sweet redemption falls

© 2008 Anata

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J. Alfred Potter

Ahh... I just love haiku. This is yet another work of yours that actually speaks to me. I am actively seeking redemption. It does bring light that we should rejoice in, but how long should we rejoice before we begin to gloat? That is a question that I can never answer.

Very good job.

Posted 16 Years Ago

Yira Simone

This was...wow...just wow. Your take on the three words simply blew me away. I LOVED this. I loved the way you implied we must take respondsibility and not let greed over take us. Loved the wording and the message of this haiku. Great work!-Catrina

Posted 18 Years Ago

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Added on February 7, 2008

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Anata

Houthalen, Belgium

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So :) first of all, i'm 25 years old. Second :p my real name is 'Siva, it's from India, though i have no relations whatsoever there. I enjoy writing, and have recently found my passion again, as i .. more..