Naga Uta

A musical naga uta

 

Forsaken her soul

Vocal's long forgotten voice

Regain strength playing

Hiding in linguistic form

Sliding love inside notes deep

Silk touch on the lute remains

Blood stained songs deter sweet lips

 

Reviews

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Seems like the love of a true musician, hiding between these lines.
Sounds so sweet, every word in every line is wunnerful, THIS is poetry..

[Kchung]

This is just a poem of beauty! There's so many different adjectives going on to create a beautiful, and almost sad, poem. Nicely done!

[Rie Sheridan Rose]

Ohhh...lovely. That is such a beautiful picture to work with too. I can't wait to play with it.

Your piece is excellent. It has a lyrical quality to it that I admire.