Mirror to the soul

 

A mirror to the soul

Where once joy beheld

 

Fractals of vibrant dreams

Reflecting what once has been

 

Beholder of magic and beauty

Flooding your wildest thoughts

 

Where peace is found

Darkness lays bestowed

 

An entryway to the core

Your eyes always tell more

 

Reviews

[Rachelle]

What a wonderfully descriptive poem. Marvelous. Keep on writing!

[Coyote Poetry]

A excellent poem. I like the description and the story in your words. Ending was very good. Eyes can tell you a thousand stories.
Coyote

[Sammypookins]

Hey Anata, cool piece!
Nice flow and description. Lovely write Sam x

[J. Alfred Potter]

I like the simplicity here. I don't know why I am drawn to this piece, but I am. The final lines feel as if they're written directly for my attention:

An entryway to the core
Your eyes always tell more

I have always hidden my eyes behind sunglasses. It doesn't matter the situation or time, morning, noon, or night. Indoors or out. I am always in my sunglasses. I think it's because of the truth of those ten simple words.

I said it before and I will say it again, you truly have a gift.

[In just us for all]

I know this reflection very well, it's always sad when I have to break the mirror, my eyes never change.
Thank you for writing

[ruth]

i like the last line "your eyes always tell more"
your poem flowed nicely and its well writen