Emotions

My voice subsided into nothingness

Bound to this existence

Trying to expel all the negative

Committed to life

 

My screams emerged in the silence

Signed for life

Erasing all the painful

Crucified for living

 

My tears absorbed by emptiness

Bestowed with guilt

Forgetting all the misery

Killed for being alive

 

My heart swallowed by darkness

Burdened with doubt

Searching for solutions

Hexed for being healthy

 

My body entangled with love

Carried with emotions

Allowing the impossible

Embraced to accept

Reviews

[Taja B.]

Ok. I reviewed this earlier and it never went through! Grrr!lol...

But anyways, I really like this poem. It's very well written and it has a nice flow.

However, even though the poem in general is good, the particular stanza I liked is:

"My body entangled with love
Carried with emotions
Allowing the impossible
Embraced to accept "

I completely understand what you're saying in this stanza. Love, to me, makes people extremely happy and it gives people courage to accept and allow things they wouldn't even dare to do if they wasn't in love. I also think that this was a very well written stanza.

Nice job.:)

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

This is a wonderful poem!!! I like all the powerful emotions you put into it.

Love it!!

Heather

[Dylan Cook]

That's beautiful and powerful! Thanks for sharing! I can relate.

[Kchung]

The last stanza really throws you for a loop, especially with the first line. The word choice is really great, it adds to the whole poem. Very nice write.