The pathway

A Poem by Anata

Searching a way

Falling

Slipping away

Deeper and deeper

To the core

Of me

Searching

Answers within reach

Fading away

From my hands

From me

Crying

Sobbing and desperate

Trying to find

Understanding

Solutions nearby

Appearing slowly

To my eyes

To me

Absorbing

Plans are formed

In my mind

In me

Reflecting

My goal is set

My life

© 2008 Anata

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Dylan Cook

I like the rhythm and flow of it

Posted 18 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benarsi

Crying
Sobbing and desperate
Trying to find
Me

Such lovely, short (but powerful! :)) lines, great, strong ending:

Reflecting
My goal is set
My life
Me

You capture so much emotion with so little, Anata! Genius! :)

B.

Posted 18 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 13, 2008

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Anata

Houthalen, Belgium

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So :) first of all, i'm 25 years old. Second :p my real name is 'Siva, it's from India, though i have no relations whatsoever there. I enjoy writing, and have recently found my passion again, as i .. more..