Bloodsisters

When friends slowly grow apart

Past memories

I think of you

Times washed away

You were there

And so was I

 

What happened

My dear

What happened to us

Slowly drifting apart

I search but I don’t find

 

My love for you

Your excuses

But I know they are true

Or so I think

I think I lost you

 

Your arms

Once held me tight

My tears stained

Your shirts

But you didn’t mind

 

The path I’m walking now

Is too hard for you

You peddle down another stream

Away from mine

Slowly drifting apart

 

You were my bloodsis

And you will always be

No matter which stream you choose

My mind will float with you

Down a lane unknown

 

Reviews

[Heather Rodwell]

A tear clouded my vision while reading this piece. I, myself, have too a bloodsister, and many a time have we fought. But we have always ended up back together, no matter what. And to think of drifting apart from her for whatever reason, breaks my heart. this poem shows me a lot of insight. I really appreciate this piece. Good work!

[Berenice]

this poem is so sad. but i really like it. i think this is the poem you told me about when you reviewed "Best Friends is a Promise" i think that you will be glad to know that i try not to write in a flash of emotion but i try to write about the deeper feeling.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Such a sad poem but also beautiful. You wrote this wonderfully!!!

Heather

[Benarsi]

So sad...:( :(

I'm sorry this has happened to you...

This is a lovely poem, filled with sorrow but still very beautiful.

Thanks for sharing,

B.