Love at First Sight

I wrote this in 2007 after I saw this guy and thought it was love at first sight.

What is this feeling

In my heart?

 

I've never felt it before

What could it be?

 

I see this guy

Then my heart skips a beat.

 

Do I hate him

or be afraid of him?

 

No

This feeling is different then those

 

I can only think of one word

That describes this feeling

 

Love

Author's Note

What do you think in general?
Please let me know what I can improve on, thank you.

Reviews

[AllyKinzz:)]

I think in general, its good. One word "No" it kind of takes away the feeling of the poem, but then again in a way, it could be a more direct way of setting the mood. Good job.