"Among The Clouds -- I Touched..."

Ken's "India November" touched me. The link to it is in the poem.

 

This one by Ken touched me:

"India November"  --  http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/geek37/1033935/

 

 

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"Among The Clouds -- I Touched..."

I close my eyes and see
  the skies... and taste the wishes
    yet again - of whim and fancy,
      the feel of "wings" and dragon's scales
        and little things long left ago...

and open them once more to be
  where I am now -- lost among the
    memories of people, places, and moments
      I'll never touch but always feel...

thanks Ken...
Chris

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Redrascalstrawberry]

This is a beautiful poem chris. Loved it!

[Brittany DeFranco]

I liked it

[sharonlee]

Tinged with... lyric melancholy. So beautifully expressed. x

[olla]

I like this.. whimsical and yet bittersweet... memories.. the dreamers and the dreams.. I followed the link as well.. a complex mind there..

[Bewitching Sensations]

love this bit...

I close my eyes and see
the skies... and taste the wishes
yet again - of whim and fancy,
the feel of "wings" and dragon's scales
and little things long left ago...

so magical Chris.. beautiful poem as always x

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

I think U come with me alone........

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

ok.......

[Shamsuddin Mazed]

good,not best.....

[Chris]

Thank you... I appreciate that you paused and thought enough of my effort to speak your thoughts...

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Jaz was here .. and there :)

[Chris]

Good seeing you Jazz...

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Good reading you, as always Chris ..