4. "I Sometimes ...See"

 

"I Sometimes ...See"

 

I sometimes ...see -

 

what it means

 

to be me,

to be you

 

to need to catch a breath,

to not want to ...breathe

 

     or be

     or not... be

 

to have ...anything

     ...everything

 

     ...nothing

 

someone...

 

 

to just stand ...looking into the sun

...rise

set.

 

No, you weren't being silly

...at all.

 

Chris

Author's Note

feel free

Reviews

[Nestor Gonzalez]

you know reading your work while listening to some muddy waters is a hell of a way to start a day, do you happen to be a bluesman yourself??

[Chris]

Isn't everyone?

[Nestor Gonzalez]

in a sense yes haha damn your wit! haha

[Ruth]

Never silly to just be and hold onto such thoughts. You seem to be a chaneller of words, to me...free flowing through you, you are a true artist whom I admire xoxo

[sharonlee]

A companionable way to start and end each day... sharing the sunrise and sunset. You weave majik my friend.

[olla]

wow...

[Kenneth The Poet]

You're being thoughtful, expressive, not silly at all.

[Emily B]

ah, that's why i love you