"Starlight, Star Bright..."

Monday thoughts

It isn’t because of Spring… you are a because of breathing.

Dreams are such terrible nothings to release…

 

"Starlight, Star Bright..."

 

Some thoughts just ...don't... fade

I don't want them to

won't let them

CAN'T let... them - you... 

expand into nothing

which is all I ever had

and ever will

...'cept each breath I held so TIGHT

- within -

as I dreamed and touched

my star...

 

Chris

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Valentine]

Now, this write I finally can see the poet in you. Nice lines and it causes one to stop and think of something you never want to let go of.. Valentine

[ms. barrie]

Beautifully penned poem enriched with ethereal, romantic imagery, longing.
I love the structure and fluidty of this write. I look forward to
Reading more of your writes soon! Thank you for sharing :)

[Heather]

I love this! especially how to everyone tis poem will mean something different, they will connect to it in different ways, welcoming the poem into their hearts, soothing their own inner "star".

[Chris]

this IS what we as poets do ...isn't it? "Connect" ... I think the neat thing is when we do it over and over with the SAME listener in different ways with the same work - read at different times.

[Heather]

Yes it is indeed. I think it is lovely that you can do that, that anyone can.

[Chris]

Hi again... it's almost your evening - was the day a good one?

[Heather]

Hello, yes it was a good one indeed thank you, and yours?

[Chris]

mine was a "friendly" one.

[Heather]

That is good, i'm glad.

[Rossen]

Good things never seem to last....till they fall into a poets page...Pleasurable visit Chris
As romantic as it gets...



Rossen

[Cristina Moldoveanu]

Stars do exist for those who know to look at them. I never touched a star, but I feel your poem is deeply emotional ...I love that balance between nothingness and filled spaces within, and after all this is the essence of a star. Maybe a little bit of Yin and Yang here.

[Chris]

Thank you for pausing with me... hope to see you again.

[Debbie_Philly]

So very beautiful..... the sentiment in this is so deeply felt... love this !!

[stars are far]

well done, the feeling was well expressed ..

[Chris]

I am glad you paused with me... come by anytime at all.

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

I wonder where all the little twinkling moments go
Do they fly ..or float somewhere over a rainbow
Or are they held deep inside.. till we.. fade away..

Chris this is so lovely ..soft and a little sad
Hold on to those stars so bright
They are what keeps us warm
In that lonely night...

Jazz xo

[Lyn Anderson]

Your style is so unique, and your writing never disappoints, it speaks softly, yet loud enough to be clear. Another beautiful thought, beautifully penned.