"A Merry Ol` Ride..."

Presented on World Poetry Open Mic, 04/17/2015

Begins 00:20:35 into the file for those that want to hear.

 

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“A Merry Old Ride…”

 

Write write here  …right

write write there

and rush to get it done

it's a Friday's sight

for the Radio's night

and another of life's puns.

 

And I guess I see the humor in the words

as each of us touches who we are -

inside

Hehehe, everytime.

 

Write right here

write right there,

bit of wrong left behind.

It's how we speak so dearly clear

before we leave

Yes, before we leave

 

…Before we leave …life…

behind.

 

Chris

 

To the tune of “Merry Old Land Of OZ”

Author's Note

Feel free to listen and comment

Reviews

[olla]

because because because because.. because of the wonderful things he does..

[Diane]

Nice. I am not used to seeing this style. I like.

[Chris]

Life needs a "sense" of humor... Hi, I hope you return.

[Diane]

Sure will. :-)

[Einstein Noodle]

to the tune of eh!? made me laugh! playful read for me .. but you do list to philosophical ..and this is no exception .. there is appreciation for others in it ... i enjoyed reading and will think about it a bit ... ;)
E.

[Chris]

and we breathe 'tween the chuckles...

[Einstein Noodle]

yes ...oh the breathing! :)

[Renée]

Of course I had to listen and a delight it was, to hear your words, with your voice !

[sharonlee]

Smiling... well done sir.

[Annie Gryphon]

this one is like a whisper of trees in the deep dark forest, gives me goosebumps

[RomaJ]

This is a fun poem. I enjoyed listening to it. Great voice as well.

[Ed Hart]

your basic wry right write rite...hello pardner

[Chris]

Chuckling here... Hi Ed - good seeing you.

[Ana B.]

I enjoyed the natural development of this write....I wonder what cannot be left behind...

[Saddam]

Write write here …right
write write there
and rush to get it done

Quite writer's write.
I enjoy reading it.

[Chris]

I'm glad you paused - thanks Saddam