"Dreams And..."

"Dreams And..."

Seems we live in the starlight,

and dream as we follow the sunlight -

eyes and breath drawn to

golden warmth and filling mellow heat

that holds all that we are,

were,

will be...

as I's meld into we's

and we's melt into

us...

and our taste IS

the breath we exhale,

and our thoughts are 

the flow of senses

and woven nows

that blend existence into futures past

and presents that become...

dreams and...

me's.

Chris

Author's Note

Feel free

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Chris,
Boy this would be pretty sang with a guitar. I love the warmth of the sun and how it brings out contrasting colors and creatures out of hiding. All of humankind has always had a love of nature and it's freedom in common. Love this! ...................kathy

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Chris... to discover your charming
poem is a delight to my soul. As we age
our memories become our present and our future
seems like a dream that may come true.
I love your unique poetry. truly, Pat

[1VJ]

Extremely uplifting and befitting dreamers throughout.

[Chris]

I appreciate your thought... thank you

[Karmee]

I really enjoyed this write, This is a wonderful write full of emotion

[Chris]

Thank you for pausing with me... and good morning

[Karmee]

good morning to you too, hope you have a lovely day :)

[Chris]

...and you as well.

[Alice Poésy]

The only way to describe this is intoxicating. So beautiful how the words just flow seamlessly just like magic. There's a certain soft urgency in these lines met by a melodic taste.

"as I's meld into we's
and we's melt into
us..." This gives such a beautiful image; a pen writing over an 'I', turning it into a 'we'; two friends conversing, and their hands suddenly meet.

What a treat this is.

[Chris]

It was nice to have you "pause" with me and to know you ...listened.

[Dara]

Sometimes it is my dreams that get me through the day. We can't escape reality but we can soften the edges. Beautifully written, mesmerizing.

[Einstein Noodle]

a beautiful dream ..especially enjoyed the feeling of warm chasing ol' sol through the day .. its been raining here for 3 days and today the sun finally broke through :) ..so appreciate .. enjoyed reading this romantic poem ..its the way things should be eh!?
E.

[Dean]

What would I do without Chris, the poetic dreamer?

[Dean]

Good to hear from you, again, Chris

[I Am Svetlana]

Such a beautiful flow of words...I'm speechless.

[Chris]

It's good "seeing" you again, I hope things are going well for you...

[Dean]

Thanks Chris---good to keep in touch