"Just Walking In The Rain..." Poem

Its always within an individual's perceptions - isn't it?

Sometimes poetry is about life and sometimes it isn't.

...and sometimes we deal,
Sometimes we don't...

Sometimes we watch the 'Game'
from half a world away... ya know?

"Just Walking In The Rain..."

He said
then she said
and he said "Some more???."

Then she said
and he said
and she said, "What for?"

Then THEY said
that we said
so none said, "Its time..."

and I said,
"I wish that
I'd never been a mime."

Chris

Author's Note

facetious and light... a child's rhyme... give it some thought.

Say as you like - feel free

I think we all play "He said and she said and he said" - with gender having placement according to a specific recognition of personal interest. People - of all ages and (I believe) unrelated to any race or religious designations have fantasies of attraction and personal interactions. For some its dreams, hopes, wishes; for some its dark - obsessions... but people have them. ...and in the end all we wanted was company along our ways - ya know?

Reviews

[Larry Dyson]

Truth always will out...except in the minds of those of Us who Dream and Plot...personal interactions always hold the keys...why I'm on WC to begin with...wanna know...Do I have any valid thinking processes? What I'm entertaining ...is it what others think or am I just in far left field..wait dont answer that ..Id rather just imagine the answer...

[nothingnothingforgetfor..]

I enjoyed the rhyming Chris, i found it playful even. Flowed wonderfully and as i type this my mind is dissecting this piece, and so far it approves very much, and i cannot help but smile. Wonderful piece my good Sir.