"Kissed..." Poem

breathing and listening to the mind echoes ~

she's right there

right there

there in front of...

there

there

here

here

so softly close

feel the held breath

tense

tension

waiting

eyes so fluttering

lids

lidded

halves...so slowly turning

bending

forming

Oh-s

leaning

leaning

touching

touching

I's

taste tasting

feeling

warm soft flowing to tighter

pressure

pressing

taste tasting heat -

so softly twisting

floating

away...

almo  s  t  breathing

al  m   o   s  t

falling

drawing

drawing back

pulling back HARD

HARDER...

here...

her  e . . .

there...

there...

 

breathe...

"Kissed..."

Chris

Author's Note

feel free

Reviews

[bob, small b. aka invs]

i really liked this. sort of an e.e. cummings feeling to it. it doesn't take a lot of words to create a wonderful description if the words are chosen and placed this well. nice writing.