"Good Morning..."

"Good Morning..."

I can taste your skin...
the feel of it
texture of you
the give and movement,
the heat and lil bumps appearing
each lil hair - so soft,
the scent - the musk
softest gleam, not-quite-a-glisten
slightly salted, touched of spice
the shiver... the paused
breath so held -
silence of FOREVER
and all the MORES to be...

and god -
it was just your cheek...

Chris

Author's Note

another day begins...

Reviews

[Kat Collins]

Sublime revelry in the morning dew, caressing the satin down....sparkles of shifting sun arousing the morning stretches. Feeling the bump and nuzzle of one next to you is a little slice of heaven.

[Joiedevivre]

smile, smile at the end of this. Yes that is what it feels like. Beautifully conveyed.

[asdarkeyesclose]

I liked the way the s sound came across in this poem building in layers. The poem has excellent texture with great word placement giving it quite a visual quality. Stunning:)

[masqued_muse]

I KNOW HOW....TO speak in tongues...(shiver). omfg....young man..(yes, yes...no,no)....lawl
masqued----->.>

[Kerry O'Connor]

It is a supreme joy to revel in the skin scent and touch of another... you captured that wonder in each line.

[Ed Hart]

hallelujah

[Emily B]

mmmmm, good morning . . .