"With Every Breath..."

A Sun-day thought

"With Each Breath..."

 

I think of you -

and Lavender...

and hunter-green

and rust

the taste of sunlight and myst.

 

The scent of ever

the morns and eves

  of always...

and every shouldn't

you've ever done...

are so softly held

behind my eyes.

 

Chris

Author's Note

A Sun-day thought

Reviews

[Dove]

Such a nice poem, great job

[Hayley]

Very insightful. It is laid back yet speaks volumes, especially in the second stanza. This is simply lovely.

[emmajoy]

More than a thought, more than a day, and full of sunshine beautiful.

[Teri B]

What a delightfully romantic poem, Chris! I would SO love to be thusly thought about, on any day of the week!

[masqued_muse]

This describes exactly how you feel; think and paint memories, Chris...in short; this is...YOU. I need these portraits..
masqued^^

[Amy Bumpas]

This is relaxing with a hint of mischeviousness;)

[sharonlee]

.... there are times when the silence is too loud, and then I read your thoughts and hear the echoes of sighs....

Shar

[Audrey Howitt]

A gentle holding of thought and person. Lovely Chris.

[KAREN]

Beautiful! A nice Sun-day thought, one that I enjoyed reading about.

[Robin]

"and every shouldn't
you've ever done..."

yes , beautiful and gentle