"Life - its just so unfair ~ "

The day after ---

A bit of examination followed by observation and introspection; ending in a historical retro-spect - 5-7-5-7-7 no less.  I must agree...

"Life - its just so unfair ~ "

A week of
nasally-stuffing sinus-seizing brazenly-c o l d,
umbrella-destruction-windy,
deeply-dark forebodingly winter-gray,
rain-swept-body-soaked
heart ground and ground
into the pavement,
days
- becomes
a s--l--o--w,
cinnamon-apple and hot-chocolate-scented-memoried,
sinfully toasty, beautifully resplendent
autumn-sun-drenched October
weekend saturday - afternoon...
where even the daymares have their own
comfy cosy to be cosily-comfy.

Now I understand
the ol' Dagwood comic strips -
all too well - uh huh...

Even genderless pillows
are Siren snuggle-bunnies.

Chris

Author's Note

The clock just struck 4PM - damn...

Reviews

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Did you just get up ? ... Was there fever ? .. Enjoy what's left of Saturday Chris ...... (5-7-5-7-7- .. OK .. HAIKU FORM .. ) You lost me for a while .. How out-of-it am I ! .. lol ..
Liked your Pillow talk .... Be WELL ..

Jazz .. :)

[Lilly Negoi]

:)) snuggle-bunnies, eh?
this is a poem that should be read in one breath - of course, with the risk of remaining breathless by the end of it. love it! :)

[patricia]

The poem seemed to get better as I read on and on. Hope your day does too! Love the genderless pillows bye the way!
Thanks.