"Seduction..." 3

Senryu

"Seduction..." 3

A gentle - man smiles
so very softly because
he knows she does too...

Chris

Author's Note

feel free

Reviews

[lei]

wow.. perfect!

[Brittany]

Warms my heart. Beautiful.

[Leslie Philibert]

Good poem, like the use of gentle-man instead of gentleman, I always enjoy the use of expressions in a new way ( in this case, you have probably sourced the word anyway), good work.

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You are a gentle-man.

A gentle poet too.

[Ruth]

This has to be the favourite! To know "she" smiles in such softness is food for more than thought - everything is superbly balanced...a sublime moment shall always stay in the heart!
xoxo

[asdarkeyesclose]

nice to have a thought expressed in this senryu, rather than a typical description for this form. very enjoyable Chris.

[emmajoy]

How deliciously subtle and loving these words are - so very you.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Very sweetly seductive - it puts a smile on my face.

[Shelley Holt-Lowrey]

Wry grin. Nice Chris.

[Michael G.]

A very wise man, Chris... a very wise man.
Very well composed, sir.