"A Definite 'Keeper'..."

"A Definite 'Keeper'..."

There is a moment

when before a single word is - spoken
there IS that look -

the one reflected in your eyes

that says more than you ever thought

  you had within you
that means more of who you are
  than even you knew existed...
that one instant of recognition
that second's pause of

...puuuurrrrrrrr.

A definite 'keeper'.

Chris

Author's Note

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Reviews

[dukovan]

The art of pauses is something I think I need to explore next.

[Chris]

Highly useful... chuckling here. Hi man, nice seeing you.

[Ruth]

Surrendered to the moment, enraptured by its outcome...

That moment reflects an eternity - all in an infinite inhalation...

Lovely!

xoxo

[Chris]

You pause so nicely... Its good seeing you.

[Emerald Seas]

Lovely thoughts - brings a smile as I read. Love the puuuurrrr at the end.

[Brittany]

I think I'd like to experience that. thanks for putting it into words.

[Chris]

Recognizing a "Keeper" is easy... having one is much harder...

[Brittany]

Truth

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Nice! Sugary sweet! Love this!....it's puuuuuurrrrrrrfect!

[Chris]

It's meant...

[Dean Kuch®]

As a "KEEPER", it is our obligation to spur our significant other to regard us as such, is it not?
I intensely enjoyed the flow and your choice of idioms within this piece. Stir-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-ring, heh-heh!

[Chris]

Sometimes only a true Puuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr will do.

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So sweet :)

[K-mo]

short simple and sweet!

[Ed Hart]

A definite keeper