A Beautiful Reminder

For the one I cared for...who never noticed

This is the morning that you know

That you told me that you loved me

But you don't.

                    Now come close

             Let me see your face

One last touch and then you'll go…

To bad I don't mean a thing to you

I spent two days in last September

Oh what a beautiful reminder

 

(All those poems I wrote, they were all for you)

 

Lets take our hears and dust the tears away

Prettier faces, up to gaze

Skin on skin, face to face

Lets all go home and shut the closet

Full of hopes we never met

And when I see you

The lack of color in your eyes

You really don't love me any more do you?

Enough of reading fiction, all the girls in those books

They can't make you fell less alone

Now its 5 am, but I know its to late

I needed a reason to stay

Lets hope our eyes stay open

And my legs crossed this way

Lets forget those words today.

I just want to see your eyes again that way.

Passenger seats left for the significant others

Your's still empty and cold

don't feel discouraged.

Maybe we can be alone together

For first time in years

Its all quite funny

  Give me more reasons to stay

Reviews

[Vesa Lee]

I like this.
The hidden "I Love You" throughout the lines of the poem makes this very unique, and could also be taken metaphorically; in a "read-between-the-lines" sense.
I skimmed some of your other pieces and found you to be a consistently good writer.
How do you do it? *smile*
Good stuff.

[Victoria Harlequin]

I don't think I could pick a favorite line out of this, I enjoyed reading! This is really good, well done!
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[Smile It's Megan&hearts..]

"Prettier faces,up to gaze. Skin on Skin, face to face."