Help those who help themselves

5th poem :3

Helping those who help themselves

like stacking books on broken shelves

A power which i failed to gain

A loss which left my heart in pain

A pain which spread to those i love,

and a helplessness I won't get above

Commit to someone you care about

Acknowledge their presence without a pout

Commit too much though, and you will perish

For they will be gone, the one which you cherish

Sever some ties, emotionally wise

so once they are buried, there won't be demise

A slight ,internal compromise...

Author's Note

Read my other stuff if you liked this! d(^w^d)

Reviews

[Black]

wow.. .
its is really beautifull,
keep on writing :)