Ask Away

May I ask you something...

 

ummm sure.

 

Who are YOU to love,

 

What are YOU to say,

 

Where are YOU to go,

 

and exactly when are YOU to leave,

 

can I ask you something...

 

 How are YOU to ask,

 

When you try to speak gods task.

Author's Note

This is an unusual write for me, but i wanted the style to give off an uncomfortable feel. tell me if it works (:

Reviews

[Revery]

I like it a lot. Different and out of the box. Nice.

[joshua deathdealer]

Great write and format..xx

[stars are far]

Very nice poem ...