Sometimes

I wrote this in dedication to my Lovely Boyfriend Timothy Jose Solomon!

Sometimes its hard to believe in love,

the draw of a tarrot card,

with two nestled doves,

the feeling of a silent thrill,

the secret in my heart so delicately still

 

A mystery of time,

Unaware of my start to climb,

yet a journey has begun,

and this romantic start,

will never cease to be done,

 

With an honest smile,

and a gaze of light,

a simple touch of earnest sight,

an awaiting kiss,

of sweet elegant bliss

 

The embrace of pleasure,

a comforting key,

a world stopped to instant blurr,

The character of a boy i only see

 

Sometimes its hard to beleive in love,

the draw of a tarrot card,

with two nestled doves,

yet theres no troubled work,

 

Just Me...

 

Plus you...

 

and love.

Author's Note

He's my One <3

Reviews

[Charles]

I appreciate that your words come from a real place. I can almost see your mind at work. Keep challenging yourself...keep editing these words. I think you may have a knack for this, just stay concise. Enjoyed it much.

[joshua deathdealer]

Nicely done. I like it a lot..xx

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A lively flow that borders on sarcasm and truth as if one, well done, good read.

[stars are far]

niceeeeeeeeee

[dhg kfvkh]

I like it very much, especially the rhymes!
The only thing (but that's just my taste) I dislike is the end (just me... plus you... and love). I think that sounds to static for a highly dynamic piece of art ;)

However, far better than my **** :D