Simple Note

I hope you understand it, but if you dont just email me and I'll explain in detail (: Thankyou

It only takes a moment to breathe,

to fill your lungs with memories,

A simple note,

to unlock all we wish to see,

 

And travel are minds in a rocky boat,

Across the vast knowledge,

Of love and pain,

The conquering waves,

Of hate and shame,

 

Tall tales of life,

we lived and didnt,

The bleeding point of a knife,

That fills of scarlet pigment,

 

Lost in a journey of memories,

Of what we chose to unlock,

And forever see,

And tip over the boat,

Of a simple note,

 

Just love and pain,

Our hate and shame,

woven together,

These memories that cant be tamed. 

Reviews

[stars are far]

This was so nice and the rhyme was great ..
well done :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Great opening lines to a well written piece. Excellent work.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I like this Simple note... it is indeed more intricate than your title suggests. Very emotional imagery depicted here...Well written!