Speak to Me

written out of a sudden suprise of emotion!

What gets me is many and a few,

The people of estranged ways,

and the chronics of words unspoken,

when the moments to speak are blinded by that,

 

 ' Nothings wrong " Verse

 

Tormenting to the mind,

These unspoken words of some kind!

 

let it out you many and a few,

speak your mind and curse the words unspoken,

now is your cue,

speak up!

 

" Im so confused "

 

I just want to know whats wrong,

to understand your emotions,

and what it is I do wrong!

 

I'm not perfect,

I cant read your mind,

so leave these unspoken words of some kind,

far far far away and behind!

 

Speak to Me!

Reviews

[screamin'ian]

Laziness borne of fear. Anxiety sprouted into oaken hedge rows keeping our individual fields of dreams forever separated.

You express this frustration extremely well. I felt it.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Sometimes it's difficult to get someone to open their heart and minds to convey what is going on... therefore, misunderstandings become a thorn in the relationship. You have voiced this frustration with honesty. Nicely done!

[Cassie Fraga]

wwwhhhoooaaa.... makes me wanna SCREAM!! a lot of intensity going on in these lines I can feel it!!! awesome way to express... you penned that well!!!