Secret chamber

Deep within my soul
lies a secret chamber
That only you
Hold the key to

This chamber
is filled with Intense love
and Admiration
Adoration, Appreciation
Slow kisses and Long Embraces
Desire for the blissful places
We yearn for

And however long It takes You
To awaken and remember
Know that I'll be waiting
My heart burning
A fiery ember

Author's Note

Please let me know your thoughts? :)

Reviews

[Emily]

I love the wording!
Well done!

[A. Fiorillo]

Thank you... :)

[jb]

Sounds hot! I want in there! Lol

[A. Fiorillo]

Lol! Your comment just cracked me up. THANKS!!! :)

[jb]

Your welcome!!!

[Justin]

that was really good :) talking about love is an extremely hard time to talk about, but you were able to do it really great :) great job :)

[A. Fiorillo]

Thanks! :) :)

[Justin]

your welcome, keep it up and i will continue to read them :)

[Jennifer M. Pennington]

Wow! Powerfully poetic, erotic, and seductive all at once. Beautifully written. So full of longing, romance, and deep connection.

[A. Fiorillo]

Thank you Jenn!! :) xo

[mattavelli]

These is lovely, Andrea. Your thoughts are clear and you show a lot of emotion. You should smack him and wake him up. Haha
Have you tried metered writing?

[A. Fiorillo]

Oh thank you!! :) hahaha...
No, I haven't tried metered writing. Don't laugh... ;) what exactly is that? HA!

[Rm]

I really like the beauty of this:)

[A. Fiorillo]

Thank you, Rocky Morris! :)

[Rm]

Your welcome:)