Sweet little girl

A sweet little girl - With a dreamers eye
Always told "hush, don't ask why"

Her mind is so full -Where questions adorn
With no one to guide her - Self consciousness is born

Fear settling in - Theres nowhere to turn
How will this little girl - Grow and learn

Her shoulders are heavy - with the burdens she bears
But you'll see grace in her soul - and feel how deeply she cares

Little girl with a dream - to make the world right
Finding all that she needs - with her dreamers sight

Reviews

[Stan Lee]

Absolutely loved this poem!! Did you write it with yourself in mind by any chance? Just wondering... :)
I know this little girl with all her burdens, caring so deeply inside.
Wonderful poem, thanks for sharing. :)

[A. Fiorillo]

Thank you! Yes...absolutely me...and many others I'm sure.. :) I'm so happy you liked it. :) yay!

[Gaurav Bhattacharya]

Love this poem. It's truly beautiful. I know a little girl that fits this description very well...

[A. Fiorillo]

Thank you, thank you! :)

[Willard Wells]

I am glad her dream is getting her through. There are so many that don't get guidance and they never seem to have a complete life. Just bits and pieces of good and bad until the end. Sorry but your work brings those thoughts to me. Nice work.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

The rhymes and the meaning behind your lines are the perfect!
Thanks for sharing the beauty of your work friend.

[A. Fiorillo]

Thank you for taking the time to read it. Xo

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend!