Little Pieces

I lost myself in you... f**k I really did,

I thought it's okay... that I can quit.

Oh no, my dear, I cannot,

We are magnets, opposites- cold & hot.

I crave your touch, your lips so close,

Come to me, give me my daily dose.

You are like a drug, can't get enough,

Being a riddle that's really tough.

Putting together little pieces of you,

All I know is, my feeelings are true.

Like your eyes, your voice's so kind, 

Love your words, your energy, your mind.

Pull me closer, so we find the clue,

How to put together little pieces of you.

Reviews

[Jakobe]

I got a bit of chills from the first two lines, very relatable. Thank you for this one. (made me sad to see you hate pancakes lol).

[lost_poet]

Thank you :D
Oh yeah, I have a bad experience with slimy pancakes, and from that moment I cannot stand them :D

[Tumi]

Loved it! It was so good
And nearly perfect words rhythm and emotion

[lost_poet]

❤️thank you for your kind words!
English is my third language, I am still trying to find my way thru it