Red Siskin

First attempt at a Nonet

Hey there Red Siskin high in the trees

We don’t see you much anymore

Why are you hiding from us?

Not all of us bring harm

Some of us bring love

I won’t cage you

Like some do

Please stay

Free

Author's Note

Please point out if anything seems wrong with the structure :) Usual comments are welcome.

Reviews

[FocusedAmnesia]

I love the structure! Great read

[李[A]]

This is just cute. I can imagine a miniscule bird just hiding :P. In terms of structure, I like how you have the cascade down in words per line, which also functions as a cascade in pace to keep the rhythm of this piece going. The theme isn't too clandestine nor aboveboard, thus giving an obvious, but strong message. Thanks for sharing this piece!

[Rene Velez]

pretty cool, I don't follow forms but this is good..

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

I really like this, the structure and the layout is awesome, write more poetry? :P x

[ब्र&#..]

This was such a great piece, great write!
alltid
-Meja

[@zeewhykay]

appealing to the eye as well as it is appealing to the mind to read. Serious respect man !!

[MysticMirage]

Nope, there is nothing wrong with the structure.
Well done indeed as it reads swiftly as poetry should.
Let me know if you would like to try something new.