My Psalm

God who sees, won't you please
Just notice me, I'm hopelessly
In need of care, I plead in prayer
For comfort here, oh come be near

God who knows my heart, you chose
My load, my burden, road uncertain
You must guide me through this night
To boldly stand and hold Your hand

Reviews

[Writergurl]

In need of care, I plead in prayer
For comfort here, oh come be near

I love this part so much, God is wonderful indeed.
Lovely write

[Aneto]

Yes, thank you so much! I followed a pretty strict rhyme scheme on this one, but the heart-cry still came through.