Reminiscing

I longed to share your world 

Your world brought such delight 

Delight and joy unfurled 

Unfurling petals bright 

Brightly shone our smiles 

Our smiles a fond embrace 

Embrace creative styles 

Styles of childlike grace 

Graceful, fleeting years 

Years of being friends 

Friendship met with tears 

Tears for how it ends 

It ends with just a word 

Words unspoken felt 

Felt a wound incurred 

Incurred the blame we dealt 

We dealt with pain and loss 

And loss infused our joy 

Our joy now free from dross 

Dross He must destroy 

Destroyed the friendly blaze 

Blaze a path prolonged 

Prolong the missing days 

Days for which I longed

Reviews

[Kaitlyn]

Love this! And how it flows together

[Aneto]

Thank you, Kaitlyn! It is one of my favorite patterns that I have tried so far.

~Aneto~

[living lavender]

i loved this so much. so creative.
like bread crumbs left behind to follow from the last word to the next line.
all of it able to begin again. a never ending poem.
{brilliantly written. love the message as well.}

[Aneto]

Wow, thank you so much for the kind words and insightful review! Hope you have a blessed day today.

~Aneto~

[living lavender]

any time and you too!
:)