Starting Open

(Open-Ended, Part 2)

When I listen longingly 

Younger overtones unveil 

Dawn alive to endlessly 

Majestically exhale 

Leaps are unrealistic, refusing every no 

Zestfully artistic, but elevated low 

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Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

yes, i agree with Angel .. very intriguing ... it's like a riddle .. the consonance and halting, skipping cadence demands attention ... have to find Part 1 now :) very intriguing write
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[Aneto]

Indeed, it was written to be a riddle. A time capsule, buried until the moment of revelation arrives...

~Aneto~

[Writergurl]

An intriguing write here, nicely written.

[Aneto]

Yes indeed, thank you! There is certainly a hidden meaning to this poem... I'm pleased that you were perceptive enough to notice and feel intrigued! ;)

~Aneto~