tender touch

Haiku 6

Eyes close as lips touch
Hands softly roam tender skin
Stirring love's desire

Reviews

[Michael X]

this is a stunning romantic haiku form, whispered and accentuated capturing sensual beauty with depth
proceeding futher and further with each well placed word, leaving a powerful impression defining
the title "tender touch" there is a soul aspect applied to the design, revealing desire in essence,
nice writing takes the reader to another time and place, to be left in gentle yearning, thanks for sharing

[Brianna Brie]

Oooh...I like the last line "Stirring loves desire." It leaves you wanting more. Splendid.

[windowguy]

Who needs a romance novel when this says it all! Brilliant.

[Miss Prince]

I like this one too. I really do like your haikus. I hated haikus until I was forced to write them for a creative writing class my senior year of high school. And now I have a new appreciation for them. So I'm glad you write them so I don't have to and I still get to enjoy them! YAY! I like this one better, p.s. for my contest, if you wanna change them. :)

[Flow]

I see you love the art of seduction and foreplay with your wonder short versus that paint pictures of moments in time of desires...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Simply beautiful and sensual haiku :-)

[Paza]

Beautiful description...well done!

[Fran Marie]

Romantic and Creative Senryu very nicely penned
THanks for submitting this piece in the Love Shack contest~Fran Marie

[alternative_be]

Very sensual!
I hope one day I am able to blend form and content as naturally as you are able to!

[J.P.O.et]

You're getting really good at these, I find them very difficult

'Stirring love's desire'

So much said and yet so much left to the imagination
Very well done Angel, sorry if I have been remiss in checking in w/u
Ur a fave of mine

J.P.O.et

[SM Davis]

I love Haiku! This was done very well. I can feel the moment. Thank you for your submission!