shining caress

thoughts to a beautiful sunset

 

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Simply breathtaking every time again

to witness such an intimate and romantic moment

between these two marvelous lovers

when the powerful and burning hot sun

caresses over our constantly striving earth,

where the fire deep down inside 

brings even the glacial ice to melt,

and at the peak of their loving embrace

the world gracefully blushes

in the most beautiful shades of red…

 

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Reviews

[Gandré]

This is beautifully innocent. I like the feeling I have when I read this. To feel 'sexually', when one experiences sun, is amazing. This ambiguity is what I love. Such a perfect poem you wrote..And in terms, es ist nicht deine Sprache, ich schätze es um so mehr; nur jemand, wer mehrere Sprachen spricht, sie lebt und untersucht, kann digest such a poetry written by non native speaker. Die Beweisusschließlichkeit kam down zu Null. Just innocence.

[sonceotrok]

CONGRATULATIONS FOR WINNING AND THANK YOU FOR PARTICIPATING IN MY CONTEST FOR FATHER SUN.

[aphotic locket]

a scene of arousal, love, and beauty. good job :)

[Katannaism]

Exquisite metaphors-Love it. Short yet filled with a lot of value. Keep it up! :D

[Jazique]

Awe that is so beautiful to even to compare to a sunset of such a love. Wonderful job.=D

[Dalebear]

Lovely nature about love in the poem thankyou for sharing

[An owl on the moon]

What a painted masterpiece of words, defining colors and emotion... Beautifully confessed, your words bring to life a world of fire and ice in graceful blush...

[WillHBIII]

words for the mind and soul refreshing like mountain air

[Coyote Poetry]

I was lucky I got to see many morning sun rising and sunset on the coat of California. It took your breath away. The gifts of nature are for us to see and feel if we are wise. The poem is beautiful. The description took me to the sea and the falling sun. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Lovely nature inspired innocent piece about love....don't ever stop writing....your usage of the sun to evoke emotion..is phenomenal