Immensity

 

 

 

Through Haze of Time

 

Consciousness dissolves

 

Gains Limitless Existence

 

By Depth of Greatness

 

No Gravity restrains

 

Unexpected Wisdom

 

Unfathomable by Matter

 

The Grandeur of Creation

 

 

 

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Reviews

[Emily Rose]

While provoking, a think a few fewer capitals would make the capitals hat you do use a little more effective. Why are "no" and "gravity" capitalized but not "restrains" or "dissolves?" It seems like some of these verbs that you're choosing to use are actually more important than some of the nouns you mention, so playing with the capitalization of certain words might positively affect the point that you're trying to get across.

[shadow night]

.... i like it..... so true

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The more we learn about the world the smaller our dreams seem to become. That is why they say ignorance is bliss.

I very thought provoking poem.