Two Hands Together

although the genre says haiku it is actually tanka, which technically is a form of haiku. the picture is my inspiration for it. this was written for a english assignment at my school on relationships.

Hands held together
Two people becoming one
Two halves make a whole
One heart beats for the other
Love is not what you expect

Reviews

[Soul Magic✯]

wow this is beautifully written... very well captured in words. i love it :)

[MagiCrystal]

Surrounding but words.. a hands touch.. and a heart... nothing was forgotten..it just keeps getting better..Like the rest of a life..
ever and ever...everything was amazing.

[ebur™]

simple, but nice. short, but complex in the meanings. great read, and great job! :)