A Taste of Your Innocence

003029008 written by V, Photo added by G

 

You layed limp on the ground
Swarms of evil surrounding you
I tasted your blood
I drank you in completely
Up to the last drop
Til you were no more
It over powered me
The more I sank my teeth in
The more I felt you through my veins
In an instant
You became a part of my being
Sevenfold my strength has become
My darkness continues to live on

Reviews

[Trée]

V, you do dark very well. The poem moves like a big cat stalking its prey. Thanks for sharing.

[Chaos]

Thank you for sharing your work.

I like the power of this piece. As a reader, I wanted to know why this kill was note worthy enough to tell about. Was this kill more important because it was of a virgin? Does her purity sweeten the wine?

[Mz. Rosilyn Vanessa]

I am very aware that this piece is about a vampire that is enjoying its night feed. I honestly enjoy this piece because it is about my favorite creature of the night. I would like to enough you to keep writing about this dark and mysterious creature of the night.